Not bad, but not as good as your piano pieces.
Let me start by saying that no-one outside Germany can do electro metal well :P
I'll be honest, I hated the high-pitched chorusy bit. Also, you don't get that many urban-metal-fuelled chase scenes.
Its got a great bassline though, but I think it needed a heavier rhythmn to bring out the full flavour of the guitar.
Please don't let me put you off doing rock, its just that here you tried to combine rock with something else altogether....
Good First Try
Let me first note that this is not a statement to put you down in anyway, it is merely constructive criticism. The melody is pretty good, but it is too repetitive... Advice for your songs in the future is to change things up a bit, mess around with other chord progressions in that key instead to stick to the same bass line of A minor, F major, C major, G major. At least you added some change with messing around with the corresponding chords. But you are falling victim to the 4 chord song, which I myself have done, and it is fine to do so but you need to add variation. Hope this helped you a bit.
Rock...... -.-
i think rock is well i think u should stick to something other than rock
like i dont mean its bad im saying its kinda cool but it just doesnt catch me like ur other stuff!
just sayin
;3
GOOD TRY THOUGH!! :D