This is messed up
You need to make it better by timing the voises.
Reviews for "The Perfect Day"
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No never again
wtf
ur gay. dont do sumthin like that again.
Neonical responds:
Huh? Do something like that again? Ok!
what the hell was that?
no plot. no humor. no facial expressions. It sucked.
Original story by?
What original story? What STORY for that matter? The guy who threw up at the ending made a smile slightly switch, but that's about it. I'll just assume you were bored one day.