Okies, here's a list of mistakes I found.
Now, you DID ask for these, so don't start flaming me. I'm a grammar nazi, so this is what I found. (I only went this far) >.<
FF7:
1: Caps: Cloud; Spelling: Aeris/Aerith (pick one, but be consistent)
2: Caps: AVALANCHE; Spelling: original
3: Caps: SOLDIER; Spelling: of
4: Caps: Limit, have
5: Caps: Cloud
6: Caps: Temple, Ancients
7: Caps: Materia, Meteor; Word Choice: It *casts* Meteor; Miscellaneous: Cure+All (Cure All is not a spell in its own, you need two materia for it)
FF8:
1: Caps: SeeDs, train; Spelling: Deserts
3: Miscellaneous: Gunblade (one word)
4: Caps: dog
6: Caps, spelling: characters