Pretty good for a first flash (^__^)
Ok..everything was great exept there was no story...no dialoge lol and some lightsaber parts were sort of long lol, but it was great for a first one...
P.S. It wouldbe awsome if u could do a game out of it, that would rock, answer me if ur going to ok?
Good for your first flash...
It only takes time for you to become very good in flash..... somethhing that i don't like much in this movie was their lightsabers hit each others and stays too long, and u did that like many times...... anyway it was a good movie!
Hey dude....
Man, for a first movie that is brilliant!
Keshovi, I look in your profile and see no flash entries. I think you are one of those fools sit there all day looking not doing.
Dan, keep on practising, I know how hard it is to make good flash's but if that truely is your first, you will become a very good animator.
If anyone disagrees with this, make a better flash.
Because most of you dumbasses can't, and thats why you sit there all day watching these.
Danny, just try make the characters more loose, and different backgrounds each 30 seconds.
Add music that goes with what is going on too.
I am 14, and I have made some good flash, so you can too.
Keshovi is 15 and can't even find Macromedia website... x.x
Well,
Normally I would just blam the hell out of any stick movie that rolled around, but I'm in a good mood, so if you do indeed read your reviews, here's some pointers.
Drop the sticks. Even if you're a really good stick animator, you're still just another stick animator. Congratualions, you're MEDIOCRE.
The things that usualy set a good flash movie from a kickn' ass flash movie are: animation quality itself, style and dynamics. In due time, your animation should improve like with all brooding animators. You also have a decient sense of dynamics (changing 'camera angles', musicallity). You're style needs some boosting though. If you're trying to 'make a name for yourself', don't do sticks, and don't do parodies. Originallity is the key to getting noticed. Avoid anything generic.
That's about it.
I WAS SOOO BORED!
It went on for soo long and in the end all he did was punch him... OMFG!