ok.........
your work is good made,but make face look more like women not a dude.
Reviews for "Santas helper"
Rennis5 responds:
ok, i will try
:)
Haha
Its very creative keep up the good work :D
In the future..
I would expect a white christmas.. Very white..
Rennis5 responds:
ok then...
not too sure what you mean by that but you gave me a 9 so
thank you :)
needs room for improvement
The problem is there's to many manly features you gave to the character. The most obvious is the face(like the 45* angle you have on the left chin bone and the general composition of the face) but there's a couple others; like how the shoulder line is larger than the waist, size of hands and the overall excessive length of the midsection.
On a side note it's generally confusing when you do work like your piece "caboose"- stuff that's fairly spot on proportionally. I imagine it turned out good because you probably referenced a picture of master chief, so you ought to keep a collection of pics, both real and drawn, of various poses and shapes for things like this.
Rennis5 responds:
i think you are right about the proportions, i never really thought about the hips needing to be wider then the shoulders and that midsection might be too long probably because the boobs are too high.
with the caboose one, i did use a referece but i also spent a lot more time on that one, this girl was pretty rushed and i just did it off the top of my head
thank you for another great review :)
Oh dear...anatomy errors are rampent
I will say that is a lovely hat, and the shading isn't too bad, but the anatomy is rather...horrible. Needs lots of work. (this will pretty much be the same as what Enact said, so feel free to skip some bits of this) First off, a woman's breast would never be that high, even if they are pressed together. Secondly the shoulders are a bit to...broad would be the word I guess. For most women, they have a shapely figure and soft/rounded shoulders. If they're too broad, it kind of makes the waists and hips look too small. Speaking of which, her hips do look a little too small there.
Lastly I would choose a color scheme for the background. Instead of green, purple, cyan, and whatever else. You should use red and green, possibly with flicks of yellow or orange to make it look warm and slightly inviting. Blue in my opinion just doesn't fit it.
Other then that, the picture is okay, needs work, but then again that's true about all art work isn't it? Keep trying, and I hope you had a happy holiday.