Very very good writing!
This is one of the best flash presentations I have seen on Newgrounds, so far. - I am reviewing this so long after it was first presented I'm sure that you don't need any critical remarks from me - You warn us that this is a long piece but it is so interesting it flew by - another submission of yours that I am passing on to my old timer peers. You are my favorite artist on this site - I'll be watching for you for years to come - Keep writing !