epicness and loss altogether
i gotta agree with albinoghost the piece is lacking the background it needs. it seems that you focused everything to the ambiance and the foreground. its out of balance. but in the end the composition is beyond words even for Fl. good job
Dragon studios
Not bad.
Definitively reminded me of a Batman Song. Not sure if the drums should of been in the beginning in that low volume background sound. The ending was a bit iffy too, it just sounded abrupt and kind of broke the flow. There was a pattern going at the end, and it was screwed when the last drum beat was the first in the pattern I heard. I can't make anything better though, so good job!
Thanks for the crits! It's always good to read what other people think, It helps me realise what people want to hear and helps me improve next time around.
:) Thanks!
Yeah, it's like Batman Begins/The Dark Knight...
But that most certainly isn't a bad thing, especially since it has just enough originality to carry it through and stand on it's own.
Thank you so much for the review. It's exactly what I wanted to push for, originiality but with that 'sound'. :D
Thankyou once again.