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defenitely needs to be improved upon. I like the conxept but found the script lacking a bit. there were also a few errors with the script as it was. the aorta is not a vein it is the major artery in the human body. Clean up the graphics, work in the scripts some more and I think this story could score much higher
good job
quick question...what the hell is a "baggrounds"? do you just not happen to know how to spell, or what? anyways..you've got potential, kid. you may want to consider adding voices.
graphics need ALOT of work
other than that maybe you can add voices and stuff, but i truely dont think that took 4 months dude, more like 3 weeks
That took you 4 months!?!?!
thats impossible, i could have made that in 2 days, it wasn't that bad of a movie, just shouldn't take u so long
Aorta is an artery not a vein...
For four monts work i was expecting something a little better than that...good concept however.
Improve on the sequel, try and improve your flash drawing skills...