Interesting
Hearing that PM read the way you and Fyndir made this makes it feel moving rather than the misguided whining of a user. I'm not sure if music in the background would improve it at all, seems very solid and dramatic as it stands. You made it sound like he was in a building at a podium perfectly, and the crowd was nicely done. Good job.
It was rather amusing seeing how many people thought this was a serious message and didn't bother reading the Author Note what so ever. That must be frustrating to say the least.