Pretty good job......
annoying main charachtor who can kick anyones ass and can't find his own....check. Annoying female sidekick with absolute zero brains and a nice ass...check. Annoying villians with redundant inner monologue.....check. well i'd say this has the makings of a great anime series. It could use some more action and maybe a fireball or two. keep it coming i look forward to the second!!!
Well...
this really resembled Trigun.. everything.. from the shades to the eating habits and clumsiness. Oh and the two guys who captured him looked a lot like Trunks from the DBZ series. Especially the storyline. 95% unoriginal. Nice try though. I suggest improving on the voices. Sounds very dull and boring. Put in a little hype. Like Amano and the big bad guy. (forgot name) He looks way better without the shades. Keep making episodes. Don't listen to these jerk fanboys. Again please improve the voices. 5 rating. Thank you!
Thanks my friend, I will take your advice when creating the next episode. God bless you.
Something that could have been better.
The first thing i notice is that the voice-acting is really bad at some parts, though everyone else has pointed that out so i wont go any deeper on that.
The artwork is better then most flashes on newgrounds, for that i thank you. The style is anime of course, which is a style myself work in and i know that it can be a real pain in the ass. Though you managed to animate it well.
The story is lacking, you dont get interested in the plot since there dont really seem to be one. And somehow it feels like the thing you are doing now has all been done before. Next time, try to put in some amazing twists and change the story completly. If you do that, it might become one of the best flashes on newgrounds.
Keep it up.
the first part most of the time can get boring, but I will improve on part 2. You know aswell as I know that the plot hasn't revealed itself yet, all in due time my friend. What everyone else thinks about the voices were that they were bad. I tell you something my friend, everyone should be thankful that there are actual voices there and not just reading word by word withuot any voices. You must understand that I am just another flash freak who isn't perfect at doing flash stuff. But thanks for this review.
you know i thought this sorta sounded familar
lol
this is like trigun minus the kick ass magnum plus youkicked in a sword....this was ok over all but ehhh
yeah, I'll try to be more original in the future. thanks.
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Pretty good, however the voices for most of the characters are bad. Amano sounds like he's trying too hard to sound tough, but you might want that effect for him. o_o;
yeah, I just realised it. heheh thanks for pointing it out :)