pretty sweet
but you need more voice actors, you had one guy do like 9 voices and it didnt really sound good.
pretty sweet
but you need more voice actors, you had one guy do like 9 voices and it didnt really sound good.
very true my friend!
Cool ^_^
Reminds me a LOT of Trigun... I mean a LOT!! The voice acting could've been better, but it was a great flash anyway ^^
no one can get enuff of trigun now can they
Something that could have been better.
The first thing i notice is that the voice-acting is really bad at some parts, though everyone else has pointed that out so i wont go any deeper on that.
The artwork is better then most flashes on newgrounds, for that i thank you. The style is anime of course, which is a style myself work in and i know that it can be a real pain in the ass. Though you managed to animate it well.
The story is lacking, you dont get interested in the plot since there dont really seem to be one. And somehow it feels like the thing you are doing now has all been done before. Next time, try to put in some amazing twists and change the story completly. If you do that, it might become one of the best flashes on newgrounds.
Keep it up.
the first part most of the time can get boring, but I will improve on part 2. You know aswell as I know that the plot hasn't revealed itself yet, all in due time my friend. What everyone else thinks about the voices were that they were bad. I tell you something my friend, everyone should be thankful that there are actual voices there and not just reading word by word withuot any voices. You must understand that I am just another flash freak who isn't perfect at doing flash stuff. But thanks for this review.
Good work!!
That you did a kick ass job. The guy sorta reminds me of trigun with his glasses and his attitude. Everything kicked ass, except for the voices they were kinda messed up. But aside from that 10/10
5/5
yeah, its better than reading it like a novel, did anyone wanna help me do the voices? nope. but thanks for the review. cheers my friend.
Hmm
It definately deserves staight 10's... Excellent graphics, sound and animation and lengthy.
hey thanks for this review! nice, short and review worthy :)