Nah...
you have the style but now you have to do your own style... i know it's alot more Sure to take a well known subject and make a joke but if you have the skills you can make you Subject of your own... GOOD LUCK!
Reviews for "A Short"
Coulda been great
LordLothlorien, your flash graphics were decent, your style was nice enough, but your humor... The joke was kinda funny, but there was so much potential for a great jesus joke, I wish you had done better.
I gave you a 3 because, well, it wasn't bad and in fact I like it.
Not priceless but not a bad try.
heh
lol, nice work. I like the music.
Potential...
Erm.. Are you trying to Mock Jesus?
Then you need to work on teh jokes a bit more.
It looked REALLY odd how the sea and the land was named and the way jesus was potrayed was really really weak for a comedic character.
This needs a bit more work to live up to the Authors claims.
really wasnt to bad
It wasnt bad at all. But jesus is gay dude so i hda to slap ya with a 5.