hmm
there was things about it a liked and things about it i didnt like. For instants when you zoomed in on the deathstar and then it showed one of the imperial landing crafts. I couldnt tell if it was supposed to be a model or the real deal.
Also there shouldnt have been talking in it, more gestures because this was an artistic film and the letters hurt it.
Otherwise good choice of music, fair animating and keep up the good work. (more detail in drawings next time)