hm.
I read your review about my work, and didn't find it too constructive, so I wonder, "Why should I be constructive about your work?" Well, whatever the reason may be, I will be constructive. Work more on the movements. It could be better. The humor made me crack a slight grin at a point in the movie, and it oddly reminded me of Family Guy, but other than that, it was more like radio dialogue. You're a good writer, but the animation needs work.
Good job, you may have the potential to do well in the future....