not the greatest
it was alright except for the fact that when he went to fight the guy at the end he didnt have a longer fight with him.... and stars moved al ittle slow didnt they? well the artwork was good so was the story but the action scenese withs sword fights werent the greatest.. STill good graphics
Decent, but..............
The characters' movements were a bit too slow, if it was a bit faster it would have been great. Also the final battle scene could have been much, MUCH longer and more interesting. It has potential, just work on it a bit more.
Uhh
I give you props, but you should learn to draw a bit better.
It looked unfinished.
your naration needs the most work, as it seemed rushed. you also should take a good look at your backrounds. They're mostly grey, and therefore make it hard to see anything else that's grey. It's only flash, so you have all te time you want to fix theese problems. I'm sure that plenty of people like this movie already, but It takes a little more to impress me. On the bright side, there is always worse flash. If every flash artist worse than you suddenly had your level of skill, then Newgrounds would become infinitely better.
Yes, I always rush narrations. Silly me >.<
its ok
i didint like it all that much i mean it was still good but it was really boring. the guy talking at the beginning was the lamest thing iv ever heard and well when a ninja stays in one place waiting for people to come his way somthings wrong man. its a ninja he should move around. plus the story was pointless. and i didint like the raymond style characters. anyway still a good job. i think u can do better.