Not bad, not bad at all!
You've really got alot of potential here. Like some of the other reviewers have said, you should seriously look into finding some better samples to work with.
I think you've got a chance and being one of the better trance/techno artists on the site. Please keep up the good work and continue submitting pieces like this.
Also, make them a little longer! I'd love to hear more out of you. <3