pretty good i guess
well its pretty good for a first time so keep up the flahimation girl looked weird lol
Reviews for "Dress-up V.1"
Bobly responds:
Thx for your support, and sorry if she looks weird, its not that easyto draw =P
seeing as how you read the reviews...
rarely do reveiws actually get read by the author but since you do Imma throw in a whole bunch of advice ^_^.
-considering it IS a dress up, you need more originality. A dress up is like another stick figure movie, just with less motion and more colors. There're way too many of them, and without anything outstanding to draw people into the game, it won't become too popular or get a very high score. Add into the game what you've never seen any other dress up game have.
-speaking as a very good drawer, the drawing weren't the greatest, but they weren't bad so I'm not gonna pick on you there. The clothes and the body could use some shades to make em look more realistic. And although it adds to sexiness that the pants and bathing suit barely fits her, I still feel it's better to be realistic.
-needs more variety of clothes, needs more music (but ur probrably already working on that)
-9/10 of the people are gonna wanna just strip her down first thing they do, instead of actually looking at your flash submission. Instead make it so that she CAN be stripped down, but actually make a game out of it. So idiots feel like they've accomplished something when she's naked. (but then again someone will post the solution on reviews) oh well you can't have everything.
Lastly, gl and keep at it. You'll improve (unless you give up)
Bobly responds:
Greeting to you, oh mighty newgrounds advice giver =D
I must say your advice first startled me, unless a movie makes it to a "top xx" list it tends to receive few reviews, and even less 1 year after =D
Now I'm not going to spend time justifying myself, yeah the drawings basic, and ya the sound options are limited :) but this was just supposed to be a Beta, i'd been planning a few things for the mai version (IE: 3 chicks minimum, possible basic motion, 3 songs to choose from minimum, an RGB picker to change the colour of the clothes instead of cluttering the screen with a version in each colour)... But with this also came some insane actionscript needs =D (well they seemed insane to me =P) so I put it aside a while.
¨roblem with me is I tend to just do bits of things, the 3 movies in my portfolio are all things I managed to do fast because if it takes long I tend to put it aside =D
When such things as AO (free until next January) and CS stop dragging me away from flash I'll probably get back to these projects, especially contest, I enjoyed doing that =D
Anyway thank you for the review,
and as some weird dude I don't know says on men each time you type /strekkie (with msn+):
Live long, and prosper.
Bobly
That was good
Dude good game.
Cant wait for the full.
Keep the good work goin!
Bobly responds:
I'm working on it, it takes a while and clothes are long to design but I'm gonna finish it.
not bad...
but the music is little annoying,please take note,ok.
3/5.
Bobly responds:
Noted, V.2 will also have 3 songs to choose from, and if none are liked, a possibility to mute.
is that a man?