Twisted....
I think overall this was a good piece...I didn't like the colored characters and the black and white background, but as it progressed it actually seemed to fit quite well. Good decision, I like the transformation of the robot. Overall good job look forward to seeing more from you....
Not bad
The music became annoying, but there is something that I liked in this flash - nothing about it is great, but you get this nice feeling while watching it...improve the sound and graphics and it will be a truly wonderful animation.
What the hell?
I don't understand why the author notes say that he proved someone wrong. Do you mean that the guy who told you could tell a story without dialogue? In that case, this only proves him RIGHT! That's a great story and there was no dialogue. Actually, anyone who knows anything about movies should know that.
I re-read my initial commentary and I was then pretty sure it wasn't saying what I wanted it to say... cursed ambiguity. Anyhow, I changed it. So a thankyou to you for making me aware of that.
It was kinda weird
Not very good at all. The people moved too much. They twitched and stuff. I liked when the person ran into the robot on the bike. It was one of those HAHA------ laughs. The person at the very end twitched like crazy. That part was horrible.
That moving you are writing about was intentional, so I'm sorry you didn't like it. Oh well! Live and learn and all that...
Wow a tranforming car!
good animation of the characters - didn't really get the story line, but got the gist of it.