hm.....
I like it, but its just not that fulfilling. I feel like there could be more to it, but if you feel its just right, then its just right. An artist knows when his work is done. on the other hand, it would be a great song for "burning the midnight oil". it feels like a song for a stressful, slow operation, that seems/feels hopeless, yet can still be done. for some reason, I'm Picturing someone important, not sure who. anyway, overall, its decent. definately not your best work,
(I think that title belongs to deads witness [but thats just me])
P.S. sorry for the errors, my keyboard is broken, and I am ... about.... to.....zzzzz...
-Snyper