YEAH
weed is the best, and this song 2
Reviews for "If I had Lungs"
merlin responds:
addiction at its finest! tell your friends!
sorry
you must be a loon to make a song like this, shouldve been some like "if i had a penis"
merlin responds:
Stay tuned! That's the one I'm going to post next!
Everything in this is really well executed except
The vocals. It's just that there is a problem with actual clarity. You might want to have a more human approach to how you represent the robot. The vocoder effect you have right now just makes it almost impossible to understand without the lyrics. The super reverb verse before the final two lines is also very hard to understand.
Vocals are a very hard thing to balance and portray clear, so you should always try to double check with an outside ear whether or not the lyrics are intelligible.
Other than that, there are negligible vocal flaws, which I'm sure you've already torn your hair out about and decided to leave be.
However, now that I'm done being an asshole, this was an awesome song, an awesome concept, and a good execution.
merlin responds:
It'd have been a much better song if Reason had an auto tuner like FL does... Oh well, perhaps some day I'll educate myself in the ways of FL. I never really wanted this song to be a greatest song of all time, if it were up to me, I would have chosen a different song :( But I'm currently working on a new one, that should have the best of both worlds on it! I hope you stumbled your way onto some of my other work!
Phenomenal!
I'm not really sure what else to say--this piece is both haunting and powerful, and the robot's voice gives the song that power. Beautifully written and and performed.
merlin responds:
Thanks for the kind words. I hope you can enjoy this song more than once! Download it, and put it on your ipod. The number that means the most to me is how many times my songs get downloaded. Check out some of my other stuff if you get around to it, too!
Sounds Good!
Makes me wish I could understand most of what he was saying, I could pick out a sentence or two every once and awhile.... It is a very good song. Please make more.... need to drag on review longer.... Still great song, nice guitar solo!
merlin responds:
That's why I posted the lyrics! Those pesky robots will get you every time. Thanks for the 10, and the review. You should check out some of my other stuff, too! Most of my stuff is very abstract, and not like anything you normally hear.