Not impressed
You could have made this submission infintely better by doing two things.
1) Make the action faster. The interegation part was done well, but the action was never as reved up as it felt it should have been.
2) MUSIC!!! This is something that many submission fall apart on. Music is what ties everything together and holds your attention. It also sets the mood of the video. This submission had none and it suffered because of it.
But overall you put alot of work into it and it's not too bad.