So you like 24 eh?
nice rip off of 24, not bad. Theres some stuff you should work on. The heads creep me out, please give them visible noses, all you have to do is draw a nose whose color extends a little past the end of the angled lines. Also, fix the captions so they aren't all typos or anything. Finally, if your gonna rip off 24, at least use the music from 24. Try to stay away from the Metal Gear series. It doesnt fit as well. I would actually suggest ripping off more than that. Rip off dialouge, sound effects, plot twists and even characters. And the most important thing you need: The actual 24 clock sound effects, the one most often used. Right now your using a less used version. Aside from that, fair job. Anyway, have a nice day!