Good
Your humor and plot is quite efficient. Keep up with that pace and improve the graphics a bit. It's pretty good compared to others, but part of it is just a little off with the animation and the vocal sequence.
I like your idea with the scene navigation at the beginning, too. Keep that in there as well as the controls during the clip.
You're pretty good at it. Do your best on other clips!
ahhhhhh
I love Zell reminds me of well me in English class
grat potential
im going to watch the others right now but from what i can tell this one had a greater potential if you would have just took more time on it. the humor is right on with the randomness but the delivery is sorta off. work on it...NOW!...jk
dont be a hater
guys you have to say that this is actrually pretty funny
Ehhh... fail much?
wow dude, talk about an all time fail, i created a newgrounds account to point out where you went wrong... ide say everything, but its mainly the voices, animation, and the lack timing taken to actually make it, looks like you were trying to rush it out. Drop the Cameo's to maybe one every 1-2 shows >_< jeeze i felt like i was watching a corny flashback montage....