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Reviews for "EgoCity Chap III"

Woah....

This entire series makes my head spin... It all goes by way too fast and leaves you in the dust very... very confused... This episode inparticular reminds me of Sonic Adventure 2, with the whole space station, magical objects, flying, and other wackey things. None of the characters are really explained and that makes me mad because I don't know whos working for what who there why because all the flashy and BOOM BOOM witht eh evil scarman and Zero with his Death Cannon of DOOM!!! Sorry, I got carried away.
Overall this entire series is good, but very... VERY confusing. Keep up the mind bogoling!

Great delivery of a badly written story.

The gaphics were insane, and the music was well done. Some of the voice acting was good, some was so-so. That aspect of this film was good. However, after watching this whole series TWICE, I still am lost as to half of what's going on! In future productions, please spend more time letting us know who the hell the characters are. Because they were similarly drawn, it was hard to remember who was who in the movies. Like I said, great job in the physical aspects of the movie, but the story itself was lacking big-time.

LenZ responds:

you might want to watch chapter 1 & 2

My ratings are probably way off

Because i Didn't watch the whole thing. But it looks very good.

Still not fully impressed....

Iv watched all you egocity flashes and every time i watch them i cant help but think to myself: 'so much potential, but nothing more than that'. When u see the special effects and graphic style u use then some scenes are better than anything here on newgrounds. Amazing use of flares, slowmotion and fast camera movement. And yet it all simply doesnt feel like its at the right place. What is it that you are exactley making? A cool fastpaced action movie or some comedy which isnt funny? Id say remove the stupid comedy scenes and make it a cool sci fi flash. What u have now simply doesnt combine together. Also the dialogue and storyline are really subpar. The dialogue is childish and the storyline is too complicated and goes too fast to be really enjoyable. Plus i feel u overuse special effects a little bit. It seems that every 5 seconds there has to be something really fast and exciting to happen. The viewer easily loses interest and overview because of this. And finally, the voiceacting is really average but u must have heard that a thousand times before. Neway i hope u may take my advice in account, because i know for sure that if u manage to create something interesting and original u will be in the top 50 in no time. Take care...

IMPROVEMENT!

I saw serious improvement with this one, even with the animation (but I think you can do better, hopefully you do in the later ones). The character overload was definitely cleared up, actually, too much. I mentioned blatant rip-off in the lat review and I was thinking especially Sonic the Hedgehog. I'm now able to stick a specific Sonic character to each of your characters, but that's not necessarily a bad thing anymore. It's now more of a parody or a tribute than an unbridled rip-off. Good work.