Never seen this before
I cant't say that u stole the idea.Some one sniffing a pistol and getting shot in the face is an idea that has never been used before.Yay.Santa Clause is funny and a very generous person.He kills white rich people and saves the righteous.
it's good
cool story but your right you need a artist to draw this
Nice
it indeed needs art. I would work on the art for this but my drawing are mostly anime style. if thats the style your looking for contact me. my aim is girwantsbiscuts or my e-mail blaklabel@rock.com
not too good
the story SOUNDS cool, but now, animate it! cuz its aint a flash MOVIE, without, well, the movie
It needs art
This one is one I seriously would like to see turned into a flash rather than just a story. Get yourself a good artist, because I am completely digging the story itself.