Speed up a little
Thats absolutely my only problem with this. I'm sorry I can only give it a 10/10
Reviews for "SSB Adventures Ep 1"
Marth Marth and more Marth
It was a great movie, a little more action couldnt hurt, it started to drag a little, but it's understandable seeing as how you had to set the story, great humor, I loved the multiple environments and the song. All in all it should make a great series, and for your question, I think you should have more of Marth in the next one. Keep up the good work!
Not too shabby, SSBM rules
We get very few SSB flashes on Newgrounds, and I enjoyed this one very much. Most of the jokes were predictable and used, but I got more than a few laughs out of this movie (especially when it was Link getting 1 of many nasty surprises). I like the sprite work, I'm impressed you got one for every character from SSBM (the Pokemon joke at the end was funny, I guess you're not much of a Pokemon fan).
The overall graphics weren't great, and the sound could use some work (you used mostly soundbites and some music). Using the same soundbite for when certain characters talk can be irritating (like Luigi), but you're onto a good start with your sprites. You might want to make the episodes a little shorter, as most people will get bored after 10 minutes if the action isn't up to pace (no offense, but this movie was rather slow).
Either way I'm getting interested in the plot of this movie, I'm a big SSBM fan, and you've got a nice idea here. Keep up the good work, and keep the gags rolling (Link's a great screwup, lol).
Good work, I hope you have episode 2 up soon.
Blackmage responds:
Thanks for the review, and as for your Pokemon comment I don't paticularly hate them but I just thought it was a funny extra
I NO HOW U GOT FOX SPRITE!!!
U JUST GOT TAILS AND PUT FOXS GEAR ON HIM!! BUT WERE DID U GET ALL THE OTHERS? GOOD MOVIE! MAKE MORE.
not too bad =D
it was a pretty good storyline, try making the graphics better though, cuz that will make it much better. wasnt much violence thogh (exept the shooting of toad, and kirby beating link up and others i may have missed) it was really funny altogether though. keep up the good work