Really great animation...
...but I think the dialogue took away from it. At least please stop saying "your" when you mean "you're". Other than that the movie was simply amazing.
Reviews for "BUILD UP!!"
Roronoa-Zoro responds:
sorry, the next will will probably have voices, and if not, i will have proper english in it! thanks for the review
Nice.
Very good, if not a little cliched. The graphic effects were very well drawn, and the humor was a little different. The only problem that I can find is that it was stick men, but some time it's good to go back to the stick animations. *shrug* Like other people have said, put in a background, a little blood, maybe some sort of plot, and youd have a great series. Keep it up!
P.S. Can't wait for #2! ^_^
wow very good stick flash
i liked this alot. my favorite part was the hulk part, that was funny. nice work
Great work but a little more could add so much.
I was really impressed with your style unfortunately it was hard to keep up with the action as I wasn't sure if the angle was changing or if the characters were moving due to absolutely no background save for the HULK scene. Things I would suggest working on would be more Sound FX, Actions that work with the background music (slower music for slower action and so on), also when they warp using a faded bard is fine but I would think with the blasts being done so nicely that you could put a lil more work into warping/speed art. All of that aside PLEASE add backgrounds and if you think you can pull it off, original backgrounds ;)
Btw for those who "CAN'T STAND STICK FLIX" get over it. People wish to be creative and if you didn't notice people are scoring the system (style/violence/humor/and sometimes sound) rather than character art and that's why they are getting the good scores. Flash is a difficult tool to work with when creating character atmosphere and art and few have the skills to do a decent job. I love seeing what people can do with stick figures that make their movies stand out. Keep up the good work all and all you Stick haters stfu and score the movies for what they are ;p As if any of you are real artists lol.
very nice
i have no prejudice against stick movies if they are good, and this is certainly one of the best i've seen in a while. Very simple, but then who needs complications, when its entertaining. The hulk cameo was pretty funny too. Good job.