Hmm...
Ok, animation? Great! Graphics? Very decent. Ideas? Fantastic!
So what went wrong? Firstly for me, the music was a letdown - in the fact that the reason your filesize was so big is because you randomly imported 2 MP3's without much compression, lobbed them in and didn't really use them to highlight the movie majorly. There were no SFX and no speech... and the text speech was either not very witty at all, or was spelt wrong!
But you have SO much potential as a NG artist, this movie proves it - and I did enjoy it... I wish you luck in future with your projects.