There was one blunder,
You had forgotten Tien's blast cannon. WHich if funny, because then you have him saying the lines in which Chaitzu had died when trying to kill Nappa. And so forth, they both keep blabbering again. Then suddenly Vegeta gets more angry and finally over powers Tien. Trust me, the real Tien could swap power levels with anyone, including Vegeta.
Hey pretty funny!
good job with this, I admire your humor
lmfao omg im one of ur fans now!!!
that was truly funny!!! i am one of ya fans..................as a matter of fact it isnt.lol lmao lmfao.good job
HAHAHAHA
That was one of the funniest things I hae ever seen in my entire life. It rivals Arfenhouse. Good job! Make another!!!
Is that ok?
As a matter of it is! It's better than ok, it was hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing when Chowsou jumped in front of the blast! Tien is seriously one of the most useless characters, excpet for Yagibrobi (the fat guy with the sword)
I really liked how you used the DBZ title "Is that ok!?"