whaaat if thats ur 1st can't wait for the next
this wasn't that bad an attempt at flash. i found the sprite movement to be quite good, and then the big dude comes in and smacks that bitch up. i have seen a lot worse flashes trust me. its ashame its pointless, but i look forward to ur next work
LoL. I appreciate your enthusiasm. I'm planning some movies in the near future that possess some ACTUAL quality.
I just started flash a day or two ago, and now that i've practiced I believe I can start cranking out submissions that are at LEAST 200% better than this one. A pity i'm too lazy to learn actionscript, though.
Work on it
Decrease your stage area about 10 pixels on each side. When you "shake the background" we shouldn't be able to see whitespace each time.
Too short and plot is, at best, thin. Needs to be longer and have some kind of punchline or some such to make it more than simply watching something get squished.
Excellent advice. Your display of both maturity and wisdom in a review instead of "U suk" humbles me.
My future endeavors will be more than a few notches above this entry in quality!
I liked
I gotta say its one of the better in the portal. Twas gory too. lol. Good job. Oh yeah and I voted you a five>
Heh... you're quite a generous reviewer.
My future works will possess some actual quality. I submitted this mainly to use as a reference on down the line once i'm king of the portal. lol.
Everyone has to have a crappy first attempt, right?
hmmm not bad
i like it for some reason, maybe since i like violence ahaha. and you get 10/10 for blood and gore sounds ahaha
Heh, some of my REAL movies which are currently in the works will feature very delicious sounds to accompany the violence.
I like how you think. >:)
wow,
wow, a good first flash. keep up the good work.
Heh! I think you're just being polite. I have some REAL flash movies in the works already, but stuff like this gives me practice so i won't mess up my major projects! (I just started flash the other day, despite having visited newgrounds.com since TeleTubby FUNLAND was #1 in the "portal")