Great rap!
But too bad, it's not such a nice production. You deserve better music to rap on! The arrangement and melodies of the production is good and all, but the quality isn't that great. =)
P.S Check out my stuff for some experimental hiphoppy stuff! =)
I have to say there's only a couple issues with this instrumental in my opinion. There's not a whole lot of substance there, meaning there should be a couple variations of instruments, and some of the background in the instrumental should've been brought our more. My only other issue with this track is the tempo wasn't tailored around this track. It's too fast for the bar count and tempo I gave, so that was a error on the part of the producer.
All of these issues will be fixed when this whole CD is mastered. I'll re-record any songs that need it, including this one once the instrumental is fixed. The purpose for posting it is so people can hear it and tell me what's wrong with it from their ears as well. Appreciated fam, and I'll check out some of your tracks in a few.
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