Wtf?
Ok, it's about a guy having a bad day with his girlfriend. Nothing new or interesting there. I think you should work on the plot, not just the graphics. Try again, bobo.
Reviews for "=:Bad Day:="
wallpaperman responds:
Flash by NeoNightfire78:
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case closed.
not bad.
You know for kind of sucky graphics, it moves so smooth and perfectly it really doesn't matter.
wallpaperman responds:
LEVEL 9: If... bla bla bla
bein level 9 don't make you good mate XD
anyway thanks for the comments
So this is your "Frame by Frame" experiment..
Hello and good evening. HaroFreak here again to give you a review of your works.
This little skit is a real short one involving a boy's bad day. From getting thrown around a room to getting beaten senseless with common house appliances. Makes me glad to be myself.
Well, let's get down to the serious work: In-Depth Analysis.
The graphics in majority are all done by frame-by-frame. Though it's a good attempt, it misses one major element when it comes to Frame-by-frame animation... the thickness of lines and dimensions alter too much and it looks less smooth. But putting the lack of smoothwork aside, It's a good attempt which takes a lot of patience to compile together. However... where're the speed lines I recommended... Hrm...
The voices are actually not bad itself... but the voices used were not expressive enough in terms of loudness and the way it fails to fit the emotions... even if it was designed to be a "Dummy" skit of some sort. However, the sound effects in general are decent overall. I recommend that you run your voice through some noise-reduction processes to remove that irritating hiss.
I particularily enjoyed it for the humour though. The voices were weak, but were funny to hear through along with the action happening. It's like a mix of those Looney-tunes throw-arounds when someone gets knocked on the head with pans, plates, etc... along with a so-so mix of the Japanese style of animation and graphical presentation. And the way you did it, it deserves humour marks.
As for everything else, they are rather minorities which need no discussion.
In summary, this little experiment is a start. The effort you put into this is what I focus om most. After all, Frame-by-frame animation is not the easiest thing to do, regardless of your level of professionalism (Heck, even they hire lots of people to do it).
As a last bit of advice... it would be great to see one of those "Grab and Swing body back and forth" events in a one-sided fight. Those are classical, REAL classical.
This is HaroFreak, signing off.
wallpaperman responds:
wow thanks for the awesome review. didn't need any of these other shitty reviews with this one XD
Anime rotoscoping is not fair i think.
But it is nicely done.
wallpaperman responds:
"Anime rotoscoping" dunno what this means, but thanks anyway
It was ok
But i think you could have done a little better with the animation, but other then that, it was good.
wallpaperman responds:
wha, the animation was the only part