Nice
I saw the intro to this earlier when you submited it, i was totally looking forward to this. I thought it was gonna be a bit funnier and i thought the voices were a little young sounding, but otherwise,he animation was good, sound was good, and the plot was okay. Keep it up, i think some funny shit is on the way.
Z z z at the beginning but...
FeedBack from CoolAddz:
If you are planning to more episodes of 'Bottles', i suggest you make your opening intro abit shorter and make it more snappy too. It had a slow pace to it and i almost asleep.
The visuals of the animation looks nice except for the bottles, perhaps develop them abit more.
The arguement scene was abit to long too and hard to hear. (mulitpy voices at once)
When the guys smashed the bottles, the breaking effect was abit... err poor.
The music in the animation was very good but please try respect the person who produced it and credit them.
To sum up, If you are planning to produce more of 'bottles', make your intro short and snappy, improve the quality of the sound abit, (I suggest you to use 'Cool edit pro',) I think you could work more on the charaters, the visual of it all is fine. perhaps at shading? and finally, credit the people who you used in the whole animation, friends and strangers.
Okay, I'll given you 6/10, as you done enough work to make it work, but needs work. as you know.
Thank for you reading,
Love you lots,
CoolAddz
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ya srry about the intro i totally forgot my frame rate was still on 12 till like the middle of the production of the movie and im workin on easier yet better looking charecters for the rest of the episodes and some new voice actors which i hope all of u will like ...when i get all of this i should have an episode done every week or so . so keep and eye out and thanks for the feedback i needed it lol peace!
pretty good
the animation was good. the drawings were great. the voice actin was good also. but a few main things that kept me from giving teh 10:
your voice actors sounded a little young...that annoys people. your voices werent streamed, therefor the mouths didnt match. stream your voices. and erm...for a while there the mouths just kinda did the flap thing, with 2 keyframes. i like to see full mouth animation with the o mouths and e mouths and f and s and whatnot. but still, good. very good. i gave 5 ^_^
hmm
credit the song plz? (paper part) at least tell me the name and creator.
tnx
3/5
i would have voted better
but your intro was too long and way too boring