im sorry kid but wasnt that good
well the graphics werent to hot and it wasnt in time i didnt really know whats going on and thoughtless by korn is generic to jonny davis's life is tragic; whoah is me but this is not directed at u kid. nice try but it didnt work but, keep on trying. all the best xx
Right
Being 11 isn't an excuse
Learn to animate
Why submit something that you got bored with yourself?
oh key doh key...
Well, it wa choppy and there wasn't any sound apart from the music, which made it boring. There seemed to be no real story to go, and your absolutely right, the end was terrible. Also I felt it was lacking a little in detail, like in the begining it was just grey with blue cacoons on it, or eggs or whatever they were. I think if you add some detail and make more of a story out of it then i will review it again, but at the mo, it is not good. But keep making flash, its not like you have to submit everything, you get better each time i bet! Cheers seea ya :)
Thank you as well, I am sick of all these people yelling at me, its nice to recieve some actual feedback