I liked it
I don't care what everyone else says I thought it had a neat style and I liked the overall effect of the movie, make more movies you will only get better.
Reviews for "Thoughtless"
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the only good thing about the movie is that korn is playing
shit
..and your not 11, it says your 13 in your profile
Scimmie responds:
you have to be 13 to sign up... I am actually 11
oh key doh key...
Well, it wa choppy and there wasn't any sound apart from the music, which made it boring. There seemed to be no real story to go, and your absolutely right, the end was terrible. Also I felt it was lacking a little in detail, like in the begining it was just grey with blue cacoons on it, or eggs or whatever they were. I think if you add some detail and make more of a story out of it then i will review it again, but at the mo, it is not good. But keep making flash, its not like you have to submit everything, you get better each time i bet! Cheers seea ya :)
Scimmie responds:
Thank you as well, I am sick of all these people yelling at me, its nice to recieve some actual feedback
I though you started off well...
heres a few pros and cons for you. Bad stuff for you first...
Cons: bit of a matrix idea with the wall of trapped people and the claw and the spider(squid) type creature, could've done with some more animation, after the beginning it went to a series of stills and then I don't know what happened, it ended to suddenly with no real idea of where it was leading and could've done with a few more sound effects.
Pros: though the style of the artwork at the beginning was good, the character seemed well defined and was strong for the ifrst few seconds before it turned into stills.
I agree you shouldn't use your age as an excuse but the abuse people give is fucking intolerale sometimes. Thought these reviews were meant to be constructive? Anyway hope you get some constructive feedback and your next attempt is more well accepted but well done anyway. Peace.
Scimmie responds:
THanks Finally someone gives me something to work on!