hmmm very gd
only critism i have was that all the characters were too similar, perhaps if you changed the colour of the clothes for the guards or slight change the shape of the clothes eg put them in boots trousers and and shirts instead of the smae clothing as the hero
not bad...
i like the animation, it's very smooth. i hope to see episode two. the only thing i can suggest to make it better is to make sure the songs are long enough for the clips. maybe you could try to get some loops in the audio portal so that they fit a little better. you'd be surprised how well some of the audio portal's songs fit with animations.
May want to take a look at...
A few things:
1) You need to credit the music. This is a legal thing. I heard Alien Ant Farm, and two songs from the Matrix soundtrack.
2) The mouths could use some work. They aren't really sync'ed with the voiceover. Also, they don't move with the rest of the head. May want to take a look at that.
3) The voice quality is kinda low. Try and increase it (mainly, the voices didn't have much bass to them). I'm not sure how you'd go about doing this though.
Anyway, if you take a look at the three things above and do what you can about them, I daresay that you might have a frontpage worthy series starting.
not bad for a first
the voices werte a bit monotone, they all sound and look the same. the voices also sound childish, the fight scene could be quicker.
the intro was also repeated quote"......Kira teached(it's taught actually)him all fighting styles......now chansu is ready for reavenge!"
and then goes on repeating"i have learned all i need i will now get revenge" flawed but still pretty decent for your first flash. make the second more original.
Gave you a 4...
Because there were no subtitles and voices could have been more varied. Nice!!