Reviews for {agnryfaic} Hardstyle

[Sonofkirk]

Hum

It wasn't really bad, but you need to work more on it. As I notice in a lot of songs on NG, the structure is not clearly discernible, and it's shame because I think this song could be better if you organized it better.

I didn't like the begining maybe, because Techno isn't my favorite style,then the melody is good actually but again the lack of structure doesn't highlight it, it's shame. And also, from 2:10 to the end, the drum is binary though, the melody is ternary ... it gives a weird feel to the end :s but I like it :P.

SO yeah, improve the structure of the song, and it will get a lot better.

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[Haggard]

\m/

The first minute of the song is used for what seems to be a build up for the rest of the song. Very little variations in this part of the track and it just feels sorta empty, because you used only two or three different beats here.

After the break the song continues with a melody that has nothing to do with the build up of the first part. Only later on you reintroduce the hard beat from the intro.

So, just like you said in the comments, this song feels unfinished. But the basics are all right, so try to build up on them! ;)

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agnryfaic responds:

Yeah, it is kinda incomplete. I'm making the intro ''synch'' a bit more with the actual track, so don't worry about that ;). I'm having a few problems mastering though, but I'll ask some ''FL pro'' friends of mine :')

Oh well, thanks for the review ;)

[perfect-insanity]

all over the place

try and focus on one type of sound, or mix between a couple at the same time, but don't switch so abruptly from one to the next, in other words add some structure to the piece, add and underlying beat to it to give some kind of measure, and don't rely on just one beat for so long in the intro it gets boring rather quickly, keep at it

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agnryfaic responds:

Hmm, structure was indeed the main problem.'

Good review, thanks :)

[Fro]

Messy.

This had a lack of organization, the beginning and the end have nothing in common and really don't fit well together in my opinion. Though the second part would fit very well in a madness episode meaning that if fixed up a little bit you could have this used in a flash someday or used someway. You did say it was incomplete so if you do some work on it and give it some structure then I'm sure it would sound much better. Good luck with it. :)

C52

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agnryfaic responds:

Holy shit, I love the RR Club :')

Anyhoo, it seems that the main problem in my track is organization. I'm not that much of an organised person, lol. Thanks, the next version will be a LOT better (I hope.)

Also, this in a Madness movie? Hmm :p

[Hotplurplegnome]

STOLEN MELODY!

dude its from that youtube video!

agnryfaic responds:

wat