Reviews for [LY] `Asylum, --

[Fro]

Alright.

I see that you are saying that it's an experiment and that you were just testing stuff out, but I still have to give it a honest review either way. ;) So it may sound repetitive of what you have already heard. The song is messy simply put. The song isn't organized and I think you have a lot of room for improvement here. The drums were too messy, a simple but more solid beat would be way better. It does seem to loop nicely and I actually had it play in the background a couple of times while I was doing other things before I realized that it was looping. Overall, it lacks structure, but you did say it was an experiment so hopefully when you fool around with it a little bit more you can get it to sound better. :)

C52

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[Sonofkirk]

Needs work

Yeah it needs work, especially with the structure of the song. Actually, I can't detect the structure of the song. I would rather hear a more simple beat (but stronger) than "messy" patterns that make the song difficult to feel. Though,at the begining, the rhythm wasn't bad, I would say I enjoyed it, especially the triplets, nice feeling. But then it gets messy.

Work on the stucture and on the beat and I would be curious to see the fixed product ; ).

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la-yinn responds:

I get what you mean, but this was more of an experiment to see what certain instruments would do. The same goes for my other two songs, they each have an other genre, but again - this was just sort of a test. Expect more quality work from me from now on. ;)

Thanks for the review!

[Bassibas]

WOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

MAN O MAN THAT WAS LIKE WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KENKERGOED!

la-yinn responds:

lyke amg, kthx m8!!1

;)

[NeverHundred]

not bad

The rhythm and timing is really good. just add more to it. A few notes are off, like the last note, kind of doesn't fit for some reason.
Still it has the potential to be a good song.

la-yinn responds:

Thanks for the review!

Yeah, I see what you mean, I tried to make it loop as I was finishing it off and it sounded O.K. in FL studio, but here it sounds a bit off, I agree.