definate right directions
very superb mastering its a talent in my eyes keep up the work it shall work for you in the music industrie + you will get fans i can see it :D
its not my type of music but your voice is good
good variations this is money music lool
but 5/5 10/10 fav but being its not my type of music i aint downloading it but Ill give ya this its good :) continue what your doing :P
Hey, thanks for taking a listen. It's much appreciated. What kind of sound would you more prefer for me to make? I really don't like being tied to one sound genre, so I like to try others. Honestly, there are issues I have with this too, mainly because it's so synthetic that overall it lacks power. I'd like to make this more live, instead of synths. Thanks for the 5 and 10 :)
It sure is the right way to go.
As compared to your other, older compositions on Ng, i think this is a good way for you to go, where the old ones at a lot of points the backing for the lyrics kind of drowned out the singing and as a general whole and in my opinion didn't fit the lyrics, this one however, isn't overshadowed by the music, because it stays nicely in the background. The singing too is nice, because you've got a good set of lyrics there and what's more important, you didn't strain your voice and stayed well within what seems to be your "comfort zone" as you've done in the past. If this came up on Itunes i would certainly buy it, if i had a credit card.
Good luck.
Wow, you'd really buy it? Thankyou!! :D That means it's a success. lol Yeah, most of my older ones have problems in way too many areas, and I think this one sounds so much better just as a result of me having gained experience from the older ones. I plan to remake them so they fit together better. I should hurry up and get my songs on iTunes. I'm having some trouble figuring out how right now though. ^_^; Thnks for the great review :)
Amazing
The song was great, 10/10 in my opinion. The only thing I can think of are that it was a little drawn out at times, albeit artistically, but even so.
I agree, sometimes I get caught up with my creative freedom that I get a little carried away.... lol Thanks for reviewing. :]
I'm stunned!
I... love... it! (:
This genre has been my favourite genre for years now.. and i still love this kind of music..
When i listen to this song i get the feeling of wanna call Universal Music and tell them about you! Well, i would have called if i could xD
Keep it up bro!
Don't give up the music!
10/10
5/5
And a download!
Thank you. It would actually be better if someone other than me made the attempt to inform record company about my work, because that would show them that my music is enjoyed by the public and that's what they're looking for. Thank you for liking my work so much and for the download, and also for saying you wanted to call Universal Music. lol
hmm...
okay. you are my fav artist atm. so out of respect i will offer some constructive criticism.
I like the content of this music, well composed VERY well sung. however it seems lacking it excitement.
whether it is the composition or the concept i dont know. it seemed a little bleaque and dull. SO SORRY! i really respect you and think you are so freaking awesome... but this song needs more movement. or susbstance... i am not sure. but i think it is just the pace.
Your harmonics are good as ever, however you may benefit from a little subtlety with the harmonics.
I really hope i do not uspet you with this review. I really do think you are awesome. if i hurt your feelings PM me immediately for an apology. but only about my poor execution of getting the point across. my opinion still stands.
Well take care dude and i really look forward to hearing the big release of your album.
:D:D:D
I agree with what you've said here. I think the core of this song is great, but there were several problems mostly due to lack of experience working with higher quality materials, and also slack due to rushing the song at points. One of the biggest issues is the percussion. They start out decent, but evolve into something really pointless. Like the transition into the second chorus doesn't hardly change the percussion at all, what a way to make the chorus sound special... lol There were actually tons creative musical aspects of this that you can't hear anymore because of the bad equalizing. The vocals were mostly good, except that the harmonies needed to be taken down a notch in volume. Even though when I posted this I thought it was so great, I have far advanced my mixing skills and now even this one needs to be remade like the ones that came before it. I don't feel offended at all by your criticism, it's actually the same way I feel about this song. :)