hmm...
okay. you are my fav artist atm. so out of respect i will offer some constructive criticism.
I like the content of this music, well composed VERY well sung. however it seems lacking it excitement.
whether it is the composition or the concept i dont know. it seemed a little bleaque and dull. SO SORRY! i really respect you and think you are so freaking awesome... but this song needs more movement. or susbstance... i am not sure. but i think it is just the pace.
Your harmonics are good as ever, however you may benefit from a little subtlety with the harmonics.
I really hope i do not uspet you with this review. I really do think you are awesome. if i hurt your feelings PM me immediately for an apology. but only about my poor execution of getting the point across. my opinion still stands.
Well take care dude and i really look forward to hearing the big release of your album.
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