wow
i love it. man its good seriously. man its hard to look at your proflie. see three songs and have them all be so good. man i even downloaded this.
wait KDUb why take the beggining out? the intro is amazing. they way it transitions is really thought out. {i can tell these kinda things} i could follow it and i never got bored. your mealody is sick as hell.
{sorry when i listen to a song i kinda just drop idea that hit. its all kinda random. }
so in my honest opinion though theres something lacking in this song keeping it from sounding professional. you say you spent two weeks on this and i can totally tell because it sounds good. not like all this other bs that people spend a day on then upload. {just like me hahah} anyways i say just keep taking what you like about other songs and interpreting into your music. youll find your own style. keep at it man. i can honestly say that you have more potential then most people i see on ng. also i just wanted to let you know. hardly can i find a song on ng that i like listening to and I LIKE THIS.