Reviews for Willburt

[Coop]

Rigid

An image of a man from an unusual camera angle, though I would say I am quite surprised to see this particular angle being employed. I'd have gone above the level plane of the eye-line, rather than so far below it.

Is the character in question fitted to a rigid frame? It looks like you're preparing to crucify him, or he's doing star jumps, which his suit would make me believe he was not doing... A more natural pose would have helped you here, studying various catalogues or clothing websites could give you an idea of how or where to pose the character.

Lastly, you really do need a background, as otherwise, it looks like this guy has been manufactured in a factory of some sort, which does take away from the image itself.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

you do know about Wil-Co don't you?!

[Blackmajiick]

Pretty good!

The 3D in this piece is really well done, and I like the uniqueness of the art style (it almost reminds me of Team Fortress 2). It almost looks like a plastic figurine. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for. It could use a little more color, though.

A background of some kind would have made this more pleasing to look at, as would fixing the point of view so that the model is in the center of the picture (or at least so that we can see the whole thing.

Overall, it's a nice model, but some mistakes were made in the model's presentation.

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[sweet21]

Has it's fair share of flaws.

It's not bad but there are problems, the character itself looks very blocky and not well rounded. Mostly in the fingers and feet. There's a problem with the shading, at first I thought the guy pissed himself. Tie looks more like a leech that just started feeding and there's an odd, blue discoloration in the neck. The pant legs are uneven, one is showing a sock the other isn't.

PlusPlusKid responds:

he's wearing tweed and a little messy, give him a break :P

[Soapbubble]

Not bad

Really like where you're heading with 3D art, always nice to see someone's skill progress.

However, this is not your best piece. There are some odd lines on his throat and face, and the anatomy is quite off, same goes for the shading. The feet look different as well, like he's wearing uneven shoes or something like that. His hair looks more like a cap or something like that, and there are some hard edges that you still want to work on smoothing out. Other than that it doesn't seem too bad, you have improved on the face with the eyes, nose and ears in your own style, and not looking off at all.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

sorry about the face lines, thought people might not notice them :P

also the shoes looked better in the non-rendered window :P

[Haggard]

Grey

Well, the 3D looks quite good here, but as others have stated, everything looks so "plastic like". Maybe it's just because nearly everything is so grey in this picture; the background, the suit he's wearing, the hair... only different colour we can see are his shoes, his tie and his skin. Colour up your life, man! ;)

Also as others have stated already, the lightning is really off. It DOES look like that guy has wet himself. Oh well, maybe he saw something that really scared him so it was just some kind of... natural reaction.

The trouses do look a bit strange though. What's with the trouser legs? Are they rolled up, or something? And why is the shoe on the left white on top (or is that a sock?) while the shoe on the left is black on top (or isn't that a shoe, but a boot? If so, why doesn't he wear a boot on the other foot?).

Last thing I can complain about is that the character is off center so much. His right hand reaches out of the canvas, which does look a bit strange.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

yes it is a sock and they are rolled up, also i think hes just bad at putting pants on