Great work, but there are some major flaws.
The graphics here were just plain awesome. And the humorous touch with the g/f things was icing on the cake. Wow, and only 1050K?
Just a few things I didnt really like:
First, the scope part is just too slow.
Second, I would have liked to see the alarm code placed in a different notepad if played again. On that note, the code should have been randomized too.
Third, the piss scene (which really seemed to be the only part of the game that required any skill) could have been controlled better. I know you did it that way to make it more difficult, but the control could have been improved more.
Fourth, you seemed to spoon-feed the player throughout the entire game.
Fifth, the gun was overdoing it a bit. Why not a small pebble? Or a small paintball gun?
Finally, I would have liked to see some more levels. If the first level was just a tutorial, then I would have retracted my fourth complaint.
I would love to see something like this on the PS2. With more elaborate effects, of course.