Almost fell asleep there...
It wasn't that bad of a movie. It just really dragged especially in the begining. Maybe speed it up a bit and possibly add some voices because reading while trying to look at what's going on isn't very fun. Definetly something here to build on. Most important thing here, speed it up. Honestly, a part of me wanted to just close it and blam it after watching for 30 seconds and still being in the intro scroll with absolutely nothing happening.