Cmon man, good idea but try harder.
OK, let me congradulate you for having the first good idea for a Starcraft Flash on newgrounds, yay *throws confetti* but it unfortunatly was one of the worst CYA (Choose Your Adventure) ever, there were only two times where you had a selection between life or death, and there was no way to tell wich was wich, side scrolling wasnt a good idea, and having to fight was a REALLY bad idea, instead of having to click the zealots, try having somthing like "FREEZE FRAME!" a zealot is standing infront of you! Do you A) Try to shoot him pointblank? B)Jump to the side and try to fight him with your knife? or C)Shoot at those barrels behind him. The player has no idea what the barrels may do, explode the whole facility? leak a poison lethal to humans? can a ghost use her cunning and agility to beat a zealot in a knife fight? probably not but hey, its worth a shot. this is an example, please take what i say to heart here, the sounds sucked, try making your own, time them better, get a better enviroment, no more slow paced crap, make it longer, alot longer, ENTERTAIN ME FOR CHRISTS SAKE! Now, good job with the IDEA but work on it will ya? Thanks ^^
4 in graphics because you made your own and thats a start, style 10 because its the first SC CYA 0 sound cuz it wasnt yours 4 violence (Needs blood here and there man!) 10 interactivity because you choose what happened and 1 humore because a ghost beat a zealot let alone two HA! A GHOST HAS TO SHOOT A ZEALOT LIKE 23 TIMES IN THE GAME TO KILL IT ALONE! SHE WOULD HAVE BEEN OMGZOR PWN B1G T1M3 MAJ0R! OWNED! sorry nerd rampant, work hard, good luck.
Moogle Out, have a nice day.