What youve written here is awesome...
I like what youve done, its very brit pop, its very cheerful and very instantly likeable.
People will definitely listen to this and think, hmmmmm this is good.
I like it, il give you 5 and download it.
For improvement, the drums sound a little bit midi and off. For the verse parts of the song, dont have the base drum going all the time, put it with the beat.
But good guitar tracks and nice solo..
Keep these bad boys coming :)
Cecil