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Reviews for "Star_Crossed (unfinished full)"

Brilliant as always

Wow, can't wait for the full version. Perfect in ALMOST every way. There's something about the second half that just doesn't compare to the demo. I don't know whether thi s is a result of me listening to the demo too much, I'm not sure. I hope it is, though, for your sake. Make it more beaty, more powerful. I'm not a big fan of ambient.

-Wimwim

Desyre responds:

Um... ok. LOL! It's going to be a while... gotta get home first... then persuade envy to work on it with me (or at least let me work on it in his presence) then... I have to overcome writer's block >.< BUT when that's done... the final will be posted and will be (I hope) much better than this one :)

HMPH

DESPITE NOT ASKING ME FOR A BACKSTORY!!!!!!! I still like it, and I like you. I think we done good. yes I do. I spose I should fix the sidechaining a tad, it's a little strong right now.

BTW YOU DIDNT MENTION MY PIANO SOLO AT THE END >8(

Blah!!!!!!! Anyways, I LOVE YOU

~Dave

(See? Thats how it's done!)

Desyre responds:

And how was I supposed to mention it dear? And, I don't know about good... doesn't compare to Envy originals... AND... you didn't offer a backstory... chimchime did >.<

BUT ANYWAY... I LOVE YOU TOO!

~the luckiest girl in the world~

WOOOHOOO!!!

BUT!:: in my opinion, when the bass comes in (17 seconds into the song), it makes the other stuff quiter. i think the other stuff should be louder.

Desyre responds:

Yeah... I've gotten the comment.. a couple of times... -.- as I said before... this is only a version... I will take into consideration your comments :) I appreciate them a lot! AND.. thank you for reviewing :)

Very well done!

Although I do agree with Morgan. I think the bass drowns out the melody a little. Anyways just letting you know so you can fix that for the final!

Desyre responds:

Thanks :) HELPFUL criticism.. is always welcomed :D

As expected.

Knew it would be great :D

Song worked well with the little story thingy :S

Niice work

5/5

Desyre responds:

yeah... Chimchime wanted publicity... I find it interesting :) It's just a little fun thing to read... ANYWAY... thank you very much :D