nice song
haha nice music
wells to be honest no offence but... for all the talents you have you aint rlly the best singer... no seriously but i love your lyrics and your melodies theyre fantastic. but wells just some points although i dont know nuthing about music making but the drum transitions arent rlly that smooth i dunno why maybe its just me.
continue making great music haha and whens the next instrumental? i love those :P