cool
i thought it was cool, if your going to make another flash you should colour it. Keep up the good work! :)
Reviews for "Evil Cat Sketch"
The-Silent-Bob responds:
:P Yeah, all my other movies should have colour, at least now they do. Thanks :)
Not bad, but...
...not very entertaining either. I don't think this is bad enough to get blammed, but it's not really something out of the ordinary either. At best it reminds me of the Steven Seagal show pt. 1 (removed from NG by request of the author, I think), where Seagal accidentally punches an old man through the head and then spends the whole day with the corpse stuck around his arm. This is short, it's not excessive enough in violence to be funny, and while I guess you intended a surprise in the ending when the cat's still stuck to the guy's arm, it's very predictable.
If you want to redo this, I'd recommend you make it somewhat longer, and add a real build-up in violence from the guy trying to get the cat off his arm - starting with hitting it, maybe pulling it, and then just snapping to different scenes where he does increasingly crazy stuff to get rid of the cat. Right now, he just shoots it in the head. That pretty much establishes straight off the bat that he's not going to get the cat off his arm, if it can survive a gunshot to the head. I think there's two directions you can go with the ending, and eitherway it should be longer; 1) the character goes on with his life and spends the rest of it with the cat on his arm (you could show stuff like graduation, his wedding, a desk job, children or grandchildren who also have cats stuck on their arms - nonsensical, but funny), or 2) he gives up on trying to remove the cat from his arm, and something stupidly funny happens so the cat lets go after all. Just some personal brainstorms.
Your work isn't bad, but maybe a little unimaginative.
The-Silent-Bob responds:
I know exactly what you mean. I was going to make him do all that crazy stuff, like putting his hand with the cat on it at the side of the road, waiting for a car to come and crush it, but it crushes his arm instead, stuff like that, but you know when sometimes you spend a while on something, and you just want to get it over with? Yeah, well that's what happened with this :) I won't re-edit it, or make a sequel or anything, as I am in production of a Halo thing, much better than this :P Thanks for the ideas and review.
That was incredibly retarded.
not bad...
Your a really good animater for a 14 yr old.(I'm 14 and i can animate crap!)
You've got skill! :D
The-Silent-Bob responds:
Heh, but us 14 year olds don't have to do as much homework and shit, so we can spend more time on Flash Movies than older people, unless they are on the doll, then they are sort of even with us. Thanks for the kind words.
I guess it was alright
wasnt that funny to me
The-Silent-Bob responds:
Oh well, thanks for the review :)