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Reviews for "Your First Game Tutorial"

Too confusing

I've liked the rest of ur tutorials but all that scripting stuff hurt my brain...

luminousnerd responds:

Lol, ok, sorry about that, I'll try to explain better if I do another tutorial.

I like it!

Very well done. Usually I think these types of tutorials suck, but you added audio (which could be a little louder) that explains things on top of what you see on the screen. Everything was well organized and I also liked how you highlighted each chunk of text that you were currently addressing so that the user could follow along. One of the best user-made tutorials I've seen here. Good job. 3/5.

luminousnerd responds:

lol,
One of the best user-made tutorials I've seen here. Good job. 3/5.
you crack me up, thanks though XD

well

i found it interesting, and you really can't expect alot of positive things from a tutorial. They are there to help you, not entertain you. I liked it, and will probably find a use for it.

P.S. you should add a thing at the end to show what the finished program looks like.

luminousnerd responds:

thanks, I'll consider that in the future

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Not bad. I know how hard it is to get a flash past jugement.(I have tried and failed.) And I think that it wasn't all bad BUT there were some parts that could have been beatter. It sounded to me that when you were explaining the actionscript you were just making it up as you went along. This made you sound like you didn't know what you were talking about (even if you did). So for the next time try to have a script written.

luminousnerd responds:

will do, thanks

pretty good

It was only one thing that was bothering me, why did you teach us to make a itemslot if its no item?

luminousnerd responds:

Heh, no idea...don't remember, sorry